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Read it yesterday. Didn't impress me... until I got to Captain Beatty's speech. o_o Don't ask me why, but he became my favorite character from that moment on, even if ...

I've read Neverwhere (AMAZING BOOK!), American Gods and Stardust (half, because one of my friends ran off with it before I could finish it.) My favorite so far would be ...

My advice to you would be: Don't don't don't don't change the first sentences. They hooked me almost immediately and drew me right away into the story. It made me ...

A lonely warrior strode across the road, raising the dust long undisturbed Ahh, I loved the "raising the dust long undisturbed"! It really conveyed the sense of loneliness well! I ...

I liked it, but it wasn't very well written. All Dan Brown did was grab some extreme theories going round about the Holy Grail, and put them in a book. ...

I started reading at chapter 7, so forgive me if I don't understand a few things. ^^; [...]leaving the islands bathing in lush sunshine. I liked that sentence alot :) ...

I liked it :) Kept my attention enough to read all of the chapters AND the continuation. The distant clock tower bell rang out twelve times. A good beginning, if ...

I am... in awe at this piece of writing. I loved it!!! ^_^ In other words; doki-doki. Loved this line to the death! =) I used to stay home on ...

It doesn t take long to get there; in fact it s only 40 winks away! I'm pretty iffy about using numbers in texts. I suppose you could leave it ...

Darkness surrounded Iloeri. The smaller form of Prmcite, her younger sister, clung to her, face pushed into her sister s plain clothes. Prmcite was shaking, in silent tears of fear. ...

Hehe, I couldn't help but look all over for it when you mentioned it in the Lounge. ^^ I read it, and it is amazing. ^^ I like the subtle ...

Ahh, I appreciated the extended comparaison between their love and the season's change. (Maybe it was accidental? xD No, that was too well writing to be accidental) I also liked ...

Ahhh, I loved the ending sentence, especially the way you used the word aglow. ^^; Sorry, little things like that catch my attention a lot. I also like the sudden ...

All of a sudden he didn t care. He kept on going straight toward it, as if he were possessed by some demon, some ghost. He would be a goner ...

I'm sure students would be shouting "Finally free!", "Freedom at last!" as well on the last day of school. I know I definitely would. xD It's very nicely written, I ...