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DUDE. WOW. Haha, I think you've probably summed up hope in a great little stanza. I mean. Yeah. If life turns gloomy, sad and dark; just keep hope to light ...

Wha.... umm... I'm speechless? The emotion portrayed in this is crazy! I absolutely LOVED it! I don't really think this could be counted as a review, but I'll try to ...

I have oooonnnnee nitpick:) The old games sitting unused in my room, so you can play them like you never did with me, because you were always to tired from ...

Hey, Taco. Great poem, but you've got some rustiness still in there. It's a little... choppy. :) Once I was dead -- Now I'm Alive. I once was Sad. Now ...

EPIC! :) I love it. The rhythm was good, it sounded like you were reading it to me as I was drifting off to sleep. A nursery rhyme, only without ...

Hey! I liked this. Your rhythm was great and the sense of mystery was just kind of THERE. I definitely thought you had real imagery. Spots I liked: the shining ...

Oh wow. This sounds like a really good movie!! When it does come out, feel free to tell me:) Now I'm no expert at scripts, so I'll just say this: ...

Hey! I love it! I have one nitpick. Take away my dread Take away my sorrow Take away my pain Take away my knowledge Here, it becomes redundant. So, instead ...

ehh.. I think I should tell the truth. I didn't like this much. The idea's great, but the writing's gone astray. Not all poetry has to rhyme. You either do, ...

I've actually thought about this a lot. I've decided that it's The Book Thief by Markus Zusak. It has everything for me: great characters, an interesting plot that doesn't rely ...

Hey hey! One nitpick: ...trying to maneuver past a semi with an add for Walgreens on it. that needs to be 'ad' Okay! that's all. :) Loved loved loved the ...

SO CUTE! IT MADE ME CRY. I don't have anything to say, other than this really got to me and I love the way it was written. I hope you ...

OMG! *Noms* This is good. I like the concept. good job. until I stepped into them. This doesn't sound right. I would say something more like, "until I marched in ...

I must say... this is good :) I don't have anything to ask or critique you on as you have already done everything possible to it. I love the piece ...

Too redundant. Sorry, but that's all I really have to say. To make the repetition work, you need more description, more emphasis on everything. Make me HURT like she does. ...