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Re: Scary Home
I think the strongest thing about this poem is the perspective. Writing it from the point of view of a six-year-old makes the situation feel much more heartbreaking because the ...
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Re: My first poem - words cannot describe
Hello! I really like how simple this poem is while still getting the feeling across. The repetition of “Words cannot describe” works well because it feels like the speaker is ...
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Re: If Only You Would Stay
Hello! I really liked the sad, dreamy feeling of this poem. The seaside, sunset, cabin, and all the little moments the speaker imagines make the life they could have had ...
Sep 3 -
Re: Be Human
Hi! This poem makes me feel lots of things, like awareness, happiness, sorrow, and some emotions I can't even explain. I am just tired because I am human. This line, ...
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Re: Reflection
Hey! I really like how this poem feels almost like the speaker is watching different versions of herself through a piece of glass. The glass works really well because there’s ...
Sep 2 -
Re: Over That Hill
Hey! This poem feels like a really honest portrayal of struggling with something over and over again and feeling like you’re never quite able to move past it. I especially ...
Sep 2
