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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Scary Home

    I think the strongest thing about this poem is the perspective. Writing it from the point of view of a six-year-old makes the situation feel much more heartbreaking because the ...

    Sep 3
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: My first poem - words cannot describe

    Hello! I really like how simple this poem is while still getting the feeling across. The repetition of “Words cannot describe” works well because it feels like the speaker is ...

    Sep 3
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: If Only You Would Stay

    Hello! I really liked the sad, dreamy feeling of this poem. The seaside, sunset, cabin, and all the little moments the speaker imagines make the life they could have had ...

    Sep 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Be Human

    Hi! This poem makes me feel lots of things, like awareness, happiness, sorrow, and some emotions I can't even explain. I am just tired because I am human. This line, ...

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Reflection

    Hey! I really like how this poem feels almost like the speaker is watching different versions of herself through a piece of glass. The glass works really well because there’s ...

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Over That Hill

    Hey! This poem feels like a really honest portrayal of struggling with something over and over again and feeling like you’re never quite able to move past it. I especially ...

    Sep 2


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