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  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: look into my eyes

    thank you

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: look into my eyes

    thank you

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: we leaves

    hi this is exhilarating for me personally. even though it is telling; narrating something actually. it is somewhat abstract in my imagination. the whole poem, for me is convoluted in ...

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: look into my eyes

    thank you John:) i think you actually ended up giving one hell of a heads up for a first review. haha. you are right on all you spotted, i'll make ...

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Inside of me.

    hi there, this is interesting, except it was a bit troubling reading and grasping the concept. i think that, if you had separated it into some sort of stanza, it ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somebody's thoughts

    Thanks for the feedback

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somebody's thoughts

    thanKs RadiantShadow :)

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somebody's thoughts

    Thank you! i'll take into account every bit of info you've passed. i truly appreciate the look into... :)

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Live or Die

    :)

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

    ayt

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

    Ayt

    Aug 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

    when chapter 8 coming out, can't wait...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 4

    you got it boss;)

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 4

    Thanks Sharrae, will do well to work on what you've said. I really appreciate your input, thanks...:)

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hexamon ~ 3

    ;)

    Aug 9, 2015


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien