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horrendous, here for a review. i'm beginning to like you a lot as a poet, even though, as i've said, poetry normally isn't my thing. you're making me gain an ...

that... was really funny. at first i didn't know if this was going to be a comedy piece or not so i was kind of on edge, but then i ...

horrendous, here for a review. i don't normally review poetry and don't know the proper structures, so i'm going to review this like it were a novel chapter, hope you ...

nitpicks: in the first paragraph, "door" is really repetetive. crimson red blood, crimson and red are the same thing. The wall to my right is lathered in crimson red blood, ...

hey. horrendous here with a review. i'll get the nitpicks out of the way first: (words in asterisks are the ones you're missing) [quoteThe first thing I noticed was *that* ...

let's get the nitpicks out of the way first: “See here? The seam here is basted "here" is repetetive. it's only used twice in that paragraph, but they're really close ...

i get behind these people all the time, but i never considered writing a poem about it. i think you could have chosen a different format and went into a ...

this poem made me smile, and here's why. my brother and i joke about his feet all the time because they seem to destroy footwear, and reading this poem i ...

even having not heard the original track that this parody is based off of, i was still able to appreciate a good jab at modern society. i'm a big fan ...

hi there GreenTulip. horrendous here for a review. i'll get the nitpicky stuff out of the way first, and don't get discouraged as i tick stuff off, it's all easily ...

hey FatCowSis, horrendous here for a little review. this struck me more poetically than narratively. the repetition of "i am ___" seemed more at home in a poem, and if ...

gdamn, i had to take a break to finish this, but that's really no issue. i'm glad to be hearing more about Rule, although its hard to keep track of ...

hey, sorry for the late review. that one-upping in dark thoughts the three of them had was great. as it devolved and the characters talked over each other, i could ...

before, i thought i related to Mr. White. now i know it. more on that later. first of all, i now understand what keeps drawing me back to this story. ...

ah, i love zombie stories. i think you picked a perfect plot to tell a short story. a large event in the protagonist's life (meeting another survivor), and sacrificing himself ...