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hollyhuez

  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Young Stupid Love

    Hola! I'm here to review your incredibly long story that took me like 45 minutes to read cx. Okay, so your grammar, darling, your grammar. Honestly, it isn't the best. ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Bitch

    Hi. I love you. This is great. I laughed when I probably shouldn't have, but I'll explain why I laughed later on. Or now. I didn't think of this poem ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: I swallowed butterflies

    Hi, how are you? (I apologize in the the beginning for any spelling errors: I am on my phone and I don't really get good auto corrections and things.) This ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Death Won't Set You Free

    Herro c: First off all, I'd like to say this: I like you. Let's be best friends ^-^..forever, jk. You're only eleven, I started writing when I was eleven so ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scales

    Hii. That was really, really good. This is a great poem, possibly one of the best I've ever read since like...3 days ago :). You've earned a gold star, hurray! ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Action / Adventure Re: In a Matter of Seconds

    Wow. This was very exciting to read. It reminds me quite of Katniss, from the hunger games, but since you didn't make the narrator a female or male, it could ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: His Tears Cost 1M$

    Whoa. You've amazed me. This is really, really, really interesting. I've never read anything so creative in my life before. I officially have feel in love with your writing style, ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Changed

    Huez is here to criticize your writing. No, no. I'm just kidding. Your poem here, it was beautifully written. Now, to me, it doesn't make much sense, but It's very ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Family of an Army Man.

    I need a tissue. That was absolutely devastating. Brilliant, but devastating. My good friend's father was in the army (he isn't anymore), and when he came was magnificent. Her whole ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How Do I Know?

    Aww

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Santa Claus is on his way !!

    Hello there ^-^ Now, this is such a bubbly, cute poem. I've fell into wonderland when I was reading it. I actually can relate to it, if I say. My ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Darkness without Light

    Hello :p I have to say, this really touched me. When I was younger, I used to have pretty bad nightmares, so my mother got me a pink, fluffy teddy ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Satire Re: The Notch

    Whoa. This is pure amazement. You're such an astonishing writer. I would have never been able to pull something like this off. Brilliant. This story is brilliant. You're brilliant. There's ...

    Dec 23, 2013


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