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Re: Young Stupid Love
Hola! I'm here to review your incredibly long story that took me like 45 minutes to read cx. Okay, so your grammar, darling, your grammar. Honestly, it isn't the best. ...
Apr 28, 2014 -
Re: That Bitch
Hi. I love you. This is great. I laughed when I probably shouldn't have, but I'll explain why I laughed later on. Or now. I didn't think of this poem ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: I swallowed butterflies
Hi, how are you? (I apologize in the the beginning for any spelling errors: I am on my phone and I don't really get good auto corrections and things.) This ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Death Won't Set You Free
Herro c: First off all, I'd like to say this: I like you. Let's be best friends ^-^..forever, jk. You're only eleven, I started writing when I was eleven so ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Scales
Hii. That was really, really good. This is a great poem, possibly one of the best I've ever read since like...3 days ago :). You've earned a gold star, hurray! ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: In a Matter of Seconds
Wow. This was very exciting to read. It reminds me quite of Katniss, from the hunger games, but since you didn't make the narrator a female or male, it could ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: His Tears Cost 1M$
Whoa. You've amazed me. This is really, really, really interesting. I've never read anything so creative in my life before. I officially have feel in love with your writing style, ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Changed
Huez is here to criticize your writing. No, no. I'm just kidding. Your poem here, it was beautifully written. Now, to me, it doesn't make much sense, but It's very ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: The Family of an Army Man.
I need a tissue. That was absolutely devastating. Brilliant, but devastating. My good friend's father was in the army (he isn't anymore), and when he came was magnificent. Her whole ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: How Do I Know?
Aww
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Santa Claus is on his way !!
Hello there ^-^ Now, this is such a bubbly, cute poem. I've fell into wonderland when I was reading it. I actually can relate to it, if I say. My ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Darkness without Light
Hello :p I have to say, this really touched me. When I was younger, I used to have pretty bad nightmares, so my mother got me a pink, fluffy teddy ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: The Notch
Whoa. This is pure amazement. You're such an astonishing writer. I would have never been able to pull something like this off. Brilliant. This story is brilliant. You're brilliant. There's ...
Dec 23, 2013
