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That was really good. Lots of over people have reviewed so I don't know if you want me to, but there was one thing I think I should say. Make ...

I am not a poetry fanatic so I don't really know what to critique you on, but I will try. This was very nice I loved how it went from ...

She pouted. “Get you, miss stroppy.” “I’m not stoppy ,” I insisted. “I’m just bored of hearing how much pain you’re in. Have you told your mum yet?” Not sure ...

I agree add to it. It has SOOOO much potential and it just ended. Like "I went to the." That was how it felt to me, the reader. I don't ...

Capitalize your I's always, like megsug wrote it will help people gain respect for you and your writings. Also, why did you post it if it wasn't done? There was ...

Alright, this chapter is short as well, but I'm trying to keep this easy and pleasant for readers to follow :) I'll try posting more soon. And for those who ...

I keep getting ideas for better novels and forget the old ones...... this is a cross between fantasy and romance, but I characterized it as fantasy the club page: girl ...

That was so true! Everything you said in there, is how I feel about all of us YWS people. I feel like I am more productive on this site than ...

I turned on or off? all the lights I could find so I was feeling less scared and alone. I took me only ten minutes to be bored to death. ...

Chapter 7 What was wrong with Liam? He was avoiding me. It's true however that he’s been avoiding me pretty much every single day since the concert for several reasons. ...

This was good, I liked it, a lot. Just like I always do with your works. They are all good and I look forward to reading them all. Haha. The ...

There are mistakes yes, but frankly other people have pointed them out and I don't like repeating other people its pointless. haha. You are a good writer and I liked ...

Wow! I can't believe I actually read all of that, and I just kept thinking... "Yes! So right...!" Inspired :D xxx Me too! Haha, two minds think alike :)

are you a poem or just a sordid fantasy? if you’re blind as a bat then can you feel the night? or do you just melt into it, the ridges ...

Thoughts On Silent Night. As chilly as the winds that bite On the long road in a winter shade of pale The traveler plods on unending un-ending snowy tide The ...