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Re: The Secret
Text: "She had always been made fun of in all of her old schools and she knew that after tonight’s party, she wouldn’t have to deal with it any longer. ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: My Own Personal Hell-- Chapter 1
Review: Start shouldn't be capitalized in the first sentence. Cooperate is one word its not co-operate. Also, the only other thing was a tape recorder, not is a tape recorder. ...
Jan 30, 2012 -
Re: Swing Chapter One
Hey there! I'm Hockeyfan87 and I am here to review your work!(: I am in no way a professional so don't take anything I say to heart(: I was pushed ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: A True Love Story
Hey! I am Hockeyfan87 and I am here to review your story! Her gorges green eyes were now shut. gorgeous is spelled wrong "Emily? Well, lets face it, you were ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Tara's Story
Well hey there! I'm HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story!(: I am no expert so don't take anything I say to heart. If I offend you by anything ...
Jan 2, 2012 -
Re: Ciel: Something of Fear
There was once a girl named Ciel Courtois who was only distinguishable by the hat that she wore. In fact, I would have forgotten who she was, or at least ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: To Be Cool.
You must dress this way to be cool. You must have this much money to be cool. You must have this cell phone to be cool. You must say this ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Deleted
Well hey there! I'm HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story!(: I am no expert so don't take anything I say to heart. If I offend you by anything ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: I shouldn't have let you go
Well hey there! I'm HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story!(: I am no expert so don't take anything I say to heart. If I offend you by anything ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Being Alone
Ok so I have to say that i really enjoyed this, but at the same time i kind of agree with Disenchanted. I was kind of confused throughout the story ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Peace!
I knew it had to be done. comma instead of period But why did it have to be so difficult? It was dinnertime and dad had just turned off the ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: I Love You Preface
Hey! I am HockeyFan87 and I'm here to review your story! I am not a pro so don't take what I say personal or to heart. Also, if you doubt ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: The Bet Chapter 1
I really liked this! I agree with the other reviews, I couldn't tell if it was girl kissing girl or guy kissing girl, again, no problem either way, but I ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Love is Rich-Chapter 2
Hi! I am Hockeyfan87 and I am here to edit your story! My comments will be in some sort of red color (: Marcus Carter was sitting in his room, ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Broken Pieces. Prologue
Hi! I am Hockeyfan87 and I am here to review! Since it is a shorter chapter I am just quoting it all! My comment will be in red. She walked ...
Aug 12, 2011