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gabe and Mary got it right. already workin on it october girl --mark--

i only got halfway way through, but thats OK! yea......cool. Gabes writting some good stuff. i think this book is going to be stupen.(you dont deserve the "dous". just kidding.) ...

coolness to the max. I think is one of your best poems yet. I have to agree with G to the abe though. those lines threw me of the poem ...

sup....yea, I have no idea where to put commas and only correction is that I don't think female mooses(meese?) have antlers. -just call me cool

k, first I'm not being literal when i said the moon howls, and high beams are on a car.

cool.I think your story line has the potential to be really cool.

I gotta agree with those other people."dying while writing this rhyme" just kinda threw me off. I think you should do as professerrabbit said or just change the line all ...

uhhh.........not really. scribblingquill was more on to it. I guess it could be perceived as that, but that is not what the poem is about

cool! i think that was flowy right up to the last line of the poem. also I think it should be in here for me. other than that thats cool ...

dude, your a fine poet and an excellent writer. don't give up. so yea......its really far your best poem yet. just do what medusa said and it'll be great. from-well, ...

awesome. It was pretty cool but you definitly need to write a sequal to The Hunt or whatever it's called.thanks for postin it. anonimously -anonimous

joey, it's break, not brake and to the writer dude, yeeeeaaaaaa.................what? this made no sense to me.that might just be me.

yes, I know. capitalize and grammar.I was pressed for time I also don't think "begun" is a word. please dont say " it's confusing. clarify it more. " because it's ...

all around awesome.like BBB said, ya can't critique it but this is definitly awesicknasticool. this kinda reminds of the noises a stomp band would make.sooooooooooooooooooo...................yea.cooli

dude..........................I never read the very last line of that.your whole finally makes sense. post the last chapter so I can see the end!!!