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Umm.. I'm not sure if this is any good. What do you think? This is just the first two chapters Chapter 1 “Tag you’re it!” Amala ran up behind her ...

Sorry, my updated version My name is Amy, It’s my birthday today I lie here unmoving No one cares anyway My face is beaten So bruised and black I lie ...

I need all constructive comments and criticism you can give me about this please Black Rain Then “This is so perfect,” Kesi smiled, holding her newborn child in her arms, ...

How can I improve this? Amala sat in the large, almost royal looking library, watching her Grandfather organise his books. He was always with his books nowadays. He didn’t really ...

Dear Diary, I’m just so hungry I had nothing to eat today A drop of water for breakfast Then I began to work away Dear Diary, mummy is sick Daddy ...

Run, run for your life Run, don’t stop to scream No time for fear, no time to be scared There's just now, and you need to run He's right behind ...

Please all comments and criticism welcome Chapter 13 No one had spoken for the past two hours. The air was filled with silent feelings of hurt and despair, just waiting ...

She was lost. Lost in a new town, with no knowing which way was forward and which way was back. And still, new town or old town, it was close ...

Teacher, five children, they hurt me They say it’s my fault that I’m black They said I was wicked, a sin against God What do I do, fight back? Daddy, ...

What are you supposed to do when you arrive back to the room you share with three other girls, and arrive inside only to find your best friend lying on ...