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It seems i'm at a loss of words. I do really enjoy this piece, it took me back at first I wasn't sure I was going to like it because ...

Goodmorning -- This is cute & catchy. I like the overall piece because I think catchy is what you were going for. If not well then thats what the audience ...

Goodmorning -- Sorry for such a quick reply but the title just drew me in. I read your piece...then read the comments. I see it as this, There are two ...

Goodmorning -- Sorry for such a short review. I loved your word choice, it gave the piece imagery along with an edgy vibe. I hope that is what you're going ...

Goodmorning -- I liked your wording very much. It displays very good imagery keep that going. I would like to make one point, my impression was more of a poem ...

Hello :) I really like this one, for one thing I can picture this senario in my head. Of someone whose tired of pretending and "throwing away her old clothes" ...

I don’t mean the things I say possible: I don't mean the hurtful things I say I know its implied, but its kind of like saying the green cat is ...

First off, sorry to sound like a grammar loser, but the / are soooo unnessasary and quite frankily annoying. I like how you based this off a book. I don't ...

I like the concept. Or atleast the concept I got. I feel this is more of a poem (sorry) I'm sure you have a tune, however my impression of reading ...

I love this because its short, sweet, and EVERY girl in the universe can relate to. I dont think you need the " : " In the last line, however. ...

I commented on your other piece. I beleie it was yours, anyway. Each piece of work shows a bit about the writers self. Even popular songs that are bought by ...

I must remind the world, even though I am a mess of contradictions and usually HATE critics who are nitpicky over is important. Word usage is a-okay but punctuation is ...

Buna dimineata! Good Morning! Just to start off I would like to remind you these are my opinions as a song writer. Lets start with the beggining haha. The first ...

Hey I'm Leyah So, i have read many piece's of lyrics and songs on this site, and i must say. Right now, as of a 5:47am in Bucharest...i think that ...

Hey Im Leyah, Am iubit-o i loved it it was crazy and fun, and enjoyable. Now a days most people write about love, heart ache, sadness. But no, this was ...