heybeccahey

Some people aren't at agreement with these rhymes, but I actually love them. They have a nice flow to them. They give more character. It was a day when something ...

I really like the title. It gave me a different view on the poem. Like this person makes you feel that you're at home, that they complete a part of ...

Some of the rhymes were a tad bit forced, and the flow was a little iffy, but I do like the whole idea to the poem. It gives the reader ...

This is rather captivating. I especially love the end, and I think you have a natural talent at writing poetry. It's also very easy to relate to, for some. There ...

The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

I'm defiantly not one for politics, and I didn't know what to expect when I read the title. I thought it would possibly be some creative form of words. But ...

I really do love this, it's quite beautiful, and the heading is rather capturing, but the question is, who is she ? For all I know, that could probably be ...

I do like the whole idea of this, but it really needs to go deeper. imagery ! There is so much imagery that can match the definition of 'pretty' or ...

ok. here I go. Alright...so, I wrote this poem last night while I was half asleep. xD I didn't do too much editing, but I was peer-pressured into posting it. ...

This really brings back some memories. Haha. When I was little, music was always my biggest curiosity. It's like a different language, really. I played piano for a couple of ...

this honestly made me teary-eyed. I've had a similar event happen to me, and for some strange reason, I really can't take it when I know that other people have ...

I really love this. Very well done. In the dark before dawn, The sleeping morning of Christmas Eve, Even with my face pressed close To the frosty glass, this is ...

I absolutely love this. it simply had me right from the start, I could read it all day! Emotion is a big part with this type of poetry. This is ...

This is very emotional, and I just happened to read this right when I was having a couple of bad memories about my childhood, so you got to my feelings ...

I do not mind that this is short. Poetry is poetry, it's your expression, your escape. In all honestly, it's whatever you want it to be. I do think this ...