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herbgirl

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love is a wicked tyrant.

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far! Now, on to the actual ...

    Nov 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: From Mrs Midas

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, I'd like to say that I really like this idea. I had never thought about Mrs.Midas, although I suppose of course there ...

    Nov 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    Hey! herbgirl here! This will be a short review for a short piece. So, I really liked this piece! I think that they way you presented your story allowed anyone, ...

    Oct 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Weed's Rant

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To be completely honest, and I don't mean to be rude here, I'm not sure I understand what you were trying to get at ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Alice.

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far. Now, on to the review. ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: She Is

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far. Now, onto the review. I ...

    Oct 19, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: theirs

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, I'm a little concerned for your health because it appears you have done nothing but watch Glee this weekend buuuut that's ...

    Oct 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: never again

    Hey babe, sorry I'm so behind on reviewing but evidently I learned how to be a grade A procrastinator this weekend. XD Anyways, on to the review! So, this is ...

    Oct 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Hauling Bricks.

    Hello! herbgirl her for a review! So, this is a nice poem. It seems to me to have a pretty good flow to it. Plus, as soon as I started ...

    Oct 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: show & tell

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, I'd like to say that I really like this poem! I usually enjoy shorter poems but this one just has so much ...

    Oct 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Honestly Wishing for Nothing More

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far, it's a great community. Now, ...

    Oct 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: a ruined house on fluffy clouds

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I really liked this poem! I think it has very good imagery, your descriptions of the falling house are fairly thorough and interesting. I ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: A woman's desire

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far. If you need anything, feel ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A hankering for gratitude

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, to start off I want to welcome you to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I have so far. ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Broken Hearted and Invisible

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I know I'm loving it. If you need anything, let me ...

    Sep 5, 2016


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi