herbgirl

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Now, i'm not particularly a fan of poems that rhyme, i often feel that they limit the poet by forcing them to use only ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here, i know i sure have so far. If you need any ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! You had a sweet little message here with this poem, and i felt that the final line, though a little confusing, was quite beautiful. ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! i'll start off by saying i think i can relate to you on this poem. Hand-holding is very significant to me due to events ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is an interesting work. i like the idea you have here, of how a man is working to make other's lives easier than ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start off, i'd like to say that i really like your writing style. Your writing has just the right amount of detail, so ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, i'd like to say i admire how abstract this is. Due to this factor it was hard to understand at times, but ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! You have a good idea here, and a nice message. i felt the message here was quite inspiring, but i also felt that there ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! For the most part, i liked this poem. You have some unique vocabulary, i especially liked the use of the word "automaton". However, i ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Wow. This was impressive. You did, in this story, what i have always wanted to do. You covered a whole life, a whole love, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, i'd like to compliment you on your use of figurative language and imagery here. The words you used created a vibrant picture ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Let me start off by saying i love what you did with the formatting! i love using non-traditional formatting, and i love seeing other ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, the thing i liked most about this piece was the characters. It seemed to me you really enjoyed writing from their perspectives, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, i think this poem is very simple and very sweet. i do not have a sister, but i fell that this poem ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here, i know i sure have. If you need anything, feel free ...