helenelizabethclarke

Hi! Welcome to YWS :) So, this was a very interesting poem to read. First of all, I think you did a good job of rhyming but a few of ...

Hi, I'll be straight, but constructive. Firstly, i'm not a fan of poems like this. It's a little generic. I think the whole point of being a poet is to ...

Heeeyyy, no reviews?! It deserves some and I hate when that happens so i'll give you one :D I like this. I think the mood is sustained throughout and you ...

Hi, what a sweet poem! Very lovely, makes you feel all warm inside :') Firstly, I think there may be too many words in each line, maybe try cutting a ...

Hi, Sorry, but I did not like this very much at all. The rhyme scheme is a little fractured and not in the effective intentional way. Some of the rhymes ...

Hi, I think there may be potential here but regarding the style and structure, I didn't care much for it. You started with a rhyme "disguise" and "lies" then completely ...

Pain clouds every inch of my brain tears fears lies through the years flow through my veins.Its a shame that i remain the same half sane all the songs that ...

Hi! I like the idea of this, but i think it could be executed better. But, if you're new to poetry then that's great- ideas are where everything comes from, ...

Hellooo! This poem overall was fairly good. The opening line was my favourite, "Dear Woman and Man." I like the way you have excluded these people from being your parents, ...

Hi! I agree that this is very short, but I do think you have put in a lot of feeling & it is wild with emotion! Technically, you've included some ...

Hi, the general theme of this was really touching and captivating. I get that you translated it from Russian, which is why some of the english doesnt make sense and ...

Heeeey, this was very endearing, if not a little generic, but if it's a pop song then generic is gooood! I particularly liked the La La La's, i love those ...

HAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA oh i loved this! i hated new moon, it was ridiculous and this just made me hate it even more. You are quite literally a literary genious! 8) my

Heeey, the title caught my attention, so i thought i'd review seeing as nobody else has, which is pretty sad :( Irresistible Features, SHOULD FEATURES BE CAPITALIZED? Life enraged with ...

Hard to come by, Impossible to touch Endless perfection, Doesn’t take much, Try to find it and You won’t succeed, Stumble across it And you’ll find more then greed. In ...