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It was an intresting poem, you don't have to put imagry in it but it would have made it better. The first stanza really caught my attention, and made me ...

This is beutiful, I can't critqe this. This is a very lovely poem. =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

I agree with nickelpickle, this is very good poem, very powerful.

I liked the subject but it lacked something to me. I don't know what. But it was a good poem.

I like this poem alot, the first and last stanzas really explained what the poem is about. I really enjoyed this, two thumbs up!!!

I don't know what to think of this poem, it sort of made sense at the beginning and then got confusing the rest of the poem. The beginning started to ...

hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!! I really like it.

I love it. I don't have the same belives as that but it still was very good.

Their O.K, but I wouldn't give them high marks. I to don't want to be harsh, but they were pretty bad. You've got poteintal though!

I'm intrested

I'm really confused about what this is about, it makes no sense to me. Sorry!

Oops! I think I posted this in the wrong catorgory! :oops: sorry! :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:

Oh, very nice! I really like how you put the italic lines inbeetween the stanzas. I love this stanza the most. "No fear inside, No tears outside. The chance to ...

Thanks for the critqe, I agree it is choppy, I wrote this a while ago and wanted some suggestions. Thanks!

I enjoyed reading this alot. But the rythum seemed a little off in some places. But other then that it was fantastic!