Published February 3, 2005
I've got part of a story going that I need some critiques on...only problem, it's a sequel, but I completely HATE the first book so yeah. I'd need to do some explaining. I can give you the plotline and stuff if you want...just wondering if the excessive explaining would be OK with you guys. 
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Yeh, give us the plotline.
I'm intrested