hekategirl

I too love the title!!! Folly...Folly...FOLLY!!! anyway this is a nice poem very descriptive. A little bumpy but nice.

This was to short, it had the poteinal to be good but it needs to be longer.

This is very beutiful, it flowed very niely and the ryhme sceame was very nice. And I think you should leave off the comma here: "Nice boys pretend, To be ...

This is a good poem but it seemed bumpy and the ryhming seemed a little pushed. I like the last line and the first line the most, this is a ...

I really enjoyed reading this, very descriptive. I really like the way you did this at the end: "so very nice..." It sort of shows how their driffting off. But ...

I really like! its very powerful and it has a good rythem, very nice.

I really like this!!! a little confusing at the beginning but very nice.

This is so peaceful and calm, excactly what a love story should be. You can almost feel the wind blowing and the swing creaking and the birds chirping its so ...

I really like this, very discriptive. It seemed a little bumpy in some parts though. I'm way intrested in what its about! I hope there more coming!

Yeah, it does, and if you were going to keep the name Samuel I think you should nickname him Sam.

I love this Sam! you did a great job on discribing where he was and what he was doing. All I can say is this is great!

Very powerfull, I unterstood your point. But the poem seemed kind of tired, I mean loads of people have written poems like this and your didn't stand out. Make it ...

This is an intresting poem, it flowed well but there was something about it that didn't seem right. The subject seemed kind of blurry to me, like you didn't excatly ...

This sounded like a song to me too, a very nice song too. It seems like a better song then poem actually. But it was very nice.

Oh I love that song Sam!! Anyway your poem, I really enjoyed reading it and it had great imagry. It was a bit long, but that was O.K.