hekategirl

um, well, its sopposed to be like 'egg' and 'ehh' combined so I didn't really know what to put. Any suggestions would greatly appreciated!

I agree with everone else, this gave me a headache and it was very confusing. I mean, what was this about? I don't unterstad it at all.

I like this poem, the first beginning lines were nice, it started the poem off very well. But it seemed a little bumpy in the middle and towards the end. ...

No i'll say I wrote it *evil grin* but, of course not, I won't say I wrote it. I'll say you wote it.

This is so beutiful, I love it. It flowed wonderfully. It was a little bumpy at some parts but the rest of it flowed great. I love it!!!

I like this, it had great imagry, their isn't much to say, just great job!

Yeah, didn't want to seem harsh or nothing but it didn't seem orginal enough to me

I agree with everything she is saying but this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cliche! you've heard this kind of thing everywhere!! But this is an O.K poem to read.

This is very descriptive and great *runs to read rest*

I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! its so mysterious and cool and freaky, its great!

Oooh, I like this, I can't really say write more because you already have written more. But the face of the girl....eck, it made a shiver go down my spine. ...

O.K next time if I say something like that i'll say something like 'this is my ohpinion' or something like that, but I like the poem anyway! :-)

I wasn't saying you HAD to capiltize anything, I was just saying that would look better to ME. But for some reason when people don't capitilize things it takes soemthing ...

Why did you post this twice???? *scratches head*

This is a good poem; it flowed very well and the ryhme sceame was great! but I don't really unterstanf the point you were trying to get across. But this ...