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Hi, Hunter here for a review! This blew my mind, Like really. This is such an easy concept but you thought of this. You put so many peoples feelings into ...

Hi, Hunter here for a review, Your poem is a good outline. What id like to suggest instead of putting a break in the segments, try to make a simple ...

Hi- Hunter here for a review!! Im terrible with grammar, Ill be honest. The poem was vary moving. I can relate to the feeling of this poem. The flow is ...

Hi Hunter here for a review! The writing is a little bare. you have some good details, but a bit more would help. It would help the reader feel more ...

Hi- here for a review! This is a very relatable short story. I can relate to this myself with hiding my little siblings as my parents fight. or even trying ...

Hi- Hear for a review. The story line is sad. i started to cry a little in my senior government class. The phrases were a little choppy at a time ...

The poem is dark. Sad, but in a way i wasn't expecting, to have a hopeful light to it. Such as: "I grew up catching rainbows" This piece of writing ...

This Poem made me feel the sad, but joy filled emotions. Time does go by to fast is the sad truth. Writing a long poem with such a magnificent flow, ...

The image of the poem is vivid. It is an emotional piece that flows vary well. The line "I have no wish to live anymore" Has a slight interruption of ...