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Re: Unrequited
Thank you so much.. I appreciate all your help.
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Watch Me Burn
Hey There. This is good. I like what you've tried to convey. And I found it really intense too. I will just make a suggestion. I Consider turning it into ...
Mar 2, 2014 -
Re: The Final Breath
I'll try and do something about it ASAP. Can't do much for the next Month and half (stupid board exams..). But once again, thank you so much! Harshita :)
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: The Final Breath
This Sameer thing has been pointed out for a second time. I think I should clarify. He's getting mad at Anika because he doesn't want to loose her. In his ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: The Final Breath
This Sameer thing has been pointed out for a second time. I think I should clarify. He's getting mad at Anika because he doesn't want to loose her. In his ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: The Final Breath
Thank you so much for the review. I've made the changes you pointed out. I really appreciate it! You've helped out a ton! Harshita :)
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: The Final Breath
Thank you so much for the review. I've made the changes you pointed out. I really appreciate it! Harshita :)
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: What a World
Hi There.. So this was really well written. It flowed really well and had a gentle rhythm going on. I also felt there was a light imagery. Also your grammar ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: Cut your Cake
Hi There.. I don't really know what to review on since the only thing I had has been pointed out already... So except that, overall your poem is nice. What ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: Rainy Day
I'm happy to have been of help.. Harshita :)
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Honeydew Hares
Hello There. Well, WOW. it's really good, and really strong. And it flows so well! Brilliant, just really brilliant! In the beginning I was thinking that in my review I'll ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Chapter 1
Hey there. Thanks for the review. I'll try and add the details from the next chapter. Harshita :)
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Chapter 1
Thank you for the review. I'll do the changes right away. Harshita :)
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Prologue.
If you have the time, could you read the Chapter 1. I've put it up a few hours ago. It must be in the green room. I'd owe you if ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Prologue.
Hey guys! I've posted Chapter 1! The link is given right under. Harshita :)
Jan 20, 2014
