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Re: Junebug
hey...its a short but nice poems...i won't point out any errors...I can't locate them in any poem at all.... but i liked....and i like September too...:)
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
Its a nice poem.... and related to something i haven't thought of for a while... I really haven't tried to rhyme with purple... Good job....:)
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Time
EXCELLENT!!! wonderful not going to point out any mistakes....since i dont know if there are any....good job.. :D
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: November Rain
nice...custom work...Loved it!!! keep it going..!! :)
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful Boy
it use your words...BEAUTIFUL...!!! good job...i enjoyed reading it...and would like further enjoy myself listening to it!! and thats what every lyrics writer should sure your song will rock...let me ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Iced Petals
Wonderful...!!! I just loved it!!! Let me know when it comes out on a record Album....:D
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Error 401
Well.....all i'll say not going to point out any mistakes as i really can't figure them out:p. But what i think about the poem is.....WOW!!! Good job mate....nice interpretation....keep it ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: High School
COOL!!! Great poem...!! very funny and I enjoyed reading it...!! :)
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Of The Fallen Spirit
WOW!! I Mean W-O-W!!! it was such a realistic and touching poem.....Loved it....Wonderful Job.... :D Keep It Going!!
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Silly Me
I can't imagine why someone would want to tear it....its such a sweet poem....just brilliant..... Good Job..!! :)
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: abiotic
Hi... I really really loved the poem you wrote!!! it was wonderful!!!! Keep up the nice work!! :)
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Humanity
OH MY GOD!!!! we just read about Nazism and your poem was kind of an overview of the complete chapter..... it was deeply heart-touching....gonna leave its mark!!!!
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Hey there!!! That was a very Very nice poem...... a good laugh!!!! had a great time reading it!!! :D
Jan 14, 2011