harshita3chaarag

Hey... Your story was short and sweet... But some improvements are required... There should have been a little background of their feelings and probably a bit more description... Otherwise I ...

Hey there... This is really sweet story... Something people end up loving :) You know him, I’m sure you do, or someone a lot like him. He’s that guy whose ...

hey there... Your poem was what I call 'short and sweet'. The only thing is that you need to divide it into paragraphs...that would have made it smoother and there ...

hey there!! Welcome to YWS!!! The theme of your poem is very nice... The flow of it was smooth and perfect... What I loved about your poem was that as ...

Hey there!!! Welcome to YWS!!! I liked your poem very much... I could feel the love radiating from the poem as I read it... It was very nicely written and ...

W-O-W!!! Gosh I love your poem!!! Maybe because I'm a crack pot for love and tragedy...!!!:p But that doesn't change the beauty of your poem... The depth of emotion from ...

Okay... I gotta a lot to say to you, yeah I gotta lot to say. I noticed your poem was absolutely brilliant( I saw you're a Paramore fan too(Your signature)). ...

well well.... Your poems are just brilliant!!!:) I literally love reading them...!! And now I see that short poems are your kind..Nice kinds. This was also a good piece. And ...

Hey again!! I liked this piece a lot too!!!:) The scenes you have created are very nice and I like how the poem has ended. The explanation you have given ...

Hey Matt... Welcome to YWS!!! You'll love it here...:) I really liked your poem... The only thing which I felt wrong was the size... I would have liked it more ...

Hey there...!! first of all welcome to YWS!!! now for reviewing... I suppose The set up is in India. The language of the shopkeeper tipped me off... Your work needs ...

nicely done dude. what I really really loved were the dialogues. Very nice specially by Ashlyn... Anyone can make out the absolute hatred that lies their. And i also love ...

Hi again!!! This chapter was very nice too... Though honestly in the end I got slightly confused... The error I could make out were spelling and grammatical errors. You need ...

HI!! I liked the piece very much. A good beginning for, Hopefully, something even better. What caught my attention was the detailed description of things and people. The description was ...

Hi!!! the piece has been Written very nicely... My favorite part was when The narrator and his mother decline help from the dad...Because that's what he deserved!!! I really liked ...