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Hello. Very energetic, and gripping chapter. Well, when I read your piece, I felt contained to find out more. Which was a good thing. As the main character was recovering ...

Awesome. That was some intense emotion. This was a pretty poem and very uplifting. We have all been suicidal. Suicide is a phase and everyone usually gets through it. They ...

Id say this story scared me which is a good thing. It was perfect for me because I'm going to be home alone for the first time for five whole ...

Was this a dream or a story of a boy enduring his last hours in a hospital bed? Either way it doesn't make sense. I was expecting more so a ...

Very very captivating and long. It had very much gripped me n kept me with chills in my spine. Perhaps give the ending a little more description I know its ...

Its very beautifully put about a person who is suffering internal pain and wants to be let alone because perhaps that person doesn't want to suffer anyone else in anger ...

I am fascinated by mythical things like unicorns as well as learning about them but you gave an explanation at the end my advice is to just keep all of ...

Hello, I will be reviewing. You could of done better with describing the setting by explaining the situation, setting up the time period, and describing how these characters dressed just ...

Hello, How are you? :D. Here to review my point of view. You did well with the story and plotline. The very beginning had me very interested. It was very ...

You make a clear point but sadly the poem has a few grammatical errors I can spot. Its hard to make a good rhyming poem but at the same time ...

This was a beautiful and complete poem about a girl named Anastasia. This poem had a nice flow to it with a mystery about it. I did like the unexpected ...

I cant lie the name had captured my interest. I love the plot set up. It seems like it is set a very long time ago? Which makes it interesting. ...

Good job! I am glad someone feels the same. we all can relate some way or another and you worded it so beautifully and the rhythm and flow was so ...

This was interesting. It kept my attention the whole time. I was surprised to find an unexpected twist at the end. I love when stories are unpredictable. It was a ...

Good poem! I admired how you would use beautiful imagery and structure. It was very descriptive. I saw that you would go about the poem by praising each bird in ...