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wow. i mean, wow. i could never write like that. it's amazing. i wish i had something more to say, but...

haha! wonderful , dahling, simply wonderful

Very cool poem, short and sweet. Last Mohican, right? Like Hawkeye?

I have no idea. Really. I wrote it on a bored, rainy day in school.

I could go either way with the "even" thing. Really like it, though, you do good charecter poems.

I agree with Wiggy, but I really do love the poem. It kinda reminds me of my Wordmaker, but more...poetic, deffinately. Very cool start!

I tried CL, hope it's better. Using punctuation in poetry is rather alien to me, I must admit.

ooooooo, very nice!

really, really fun. it's kinda nice to see you doing something less...er, morbid. not that I don't like your other stuf, but, hey, it's me!

Wow. You think you know a person....... It's amazing, phoenixfire, really, truly awesome.

just a note, guys: WE are the wordmakers

Wow, thanks very much, Mesh and Snoik! I'm kinda not used to getting comments on poetry, so doing my best here. So glad you guys liked it (Mesh: at least ...

don't get rid of the "black and blue" line it's perfect, right there the poem is so powerful, it's not necessarily supposed to be perfectly smooth and flowing. a little ...

the aliterations were also very nice.

I really enjoyed it. The use of imagry (like, "words become land") really spoke to the way I feel, or the way writing makes me feel. I'm glad it didn't ...