Rhyme!

Rhyme rhymes with time
And thyme
And 'Go out to dine'
You can cut down a pine
Or say that you're fine
Or, rather marvelously, wonderfully divine
You can look at a sign
Or tap a brass chime
And if you're daring--commit a crime
Go get gold from a mine!
Go have bread and wine!
And when you're finished, go soak cakes in wine!
Draw me a line,
Or color a nine!
Go swim in the Rhine!
But for gosh sakes, you lime
You irritating, aggravating, nauseating mime
DO NOT FORGET TO RHYME!!!

Comments & reviews · 4
Note: You are not logged in, but you can still leave a comment or review. Before it shows up, a moderator will need to approve your comment (this is only a safeguard against spambots). Leave your email if you would like to be notified when your message is approved.

User avatar
gyrfalcon
Comment

really, really fun. it's kinda nice to see you doing something less...er, morbid. not that I don't like your other stuf, but, hey, it's me!

User avatar
Snoink
Review
Snoink wrote a review · Fri Sep 15, 2006 6:09 am

Hehehe... very Shel Silversteinish of you. ;)

This is my favorite poem of yours so far since, though the images it gives are very strange and unconventional, it still gives concrete images instead of abstract ideas.

User avatar
Wiggy
Comment

Weird, but I liked it! It was really cute! I am so going to have to try one of those poems! :D



To succeed, you need to find something to hold on to, something to motivate you, something to inspire you.
— Tony Dorsett