Rhyme rhymes with time
And thyme
And 'Go out to dine'
You can cut down a pine
Or say that you're fine
Or, rather marvelously, wonderfully divine
You can look at a sign
Or tap a brass chime
And if you're daring--commit a crime
Go get gold from a mine!
Go have bread and wine!
And when you're finished, go soak cakes in wine!
Draw me a line,
Or color a nine!
Go swim in the Rhine!
But for gosh sakes, you lime
You irritating, aggravating, nauseating mime
DO NOT FORGET TO RHYME!!!
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really, really fun. it's kinda nice to see you doing something less...er, morbid. not that I don't like your other stuf, but, hey, it's me!
Hehehe... very Shel Silversteinish of you.
This is my favorite poem of yours so far since, though the images it gives are very strange and unconventional, it still gives concrete images instead of abstract ideas.
Weird, but I liked it! It was really cute! I am so going to have to try one of those poems!