Rhyme!

by Phoenixfire

Published September 15, 2006

Rhyme rhymes with time
And thyme
And 'Go out to dine'
You can cut down a pine
Or say that you're fine
Or, rather marvelously, wonderfully divine
You can look at a sign
Or tap a brass chime
And if you're daring--commit a crime
Go get gold from a mine!
Go have bread and wine!
And when you're finished, go soak cakes in wine!
Draw me a line,
Or color a nine!
Go swim in the Rhine!
But for gosh sakes, you lime
You irritating, aggravating, nauseating mime
DO NOT FORGET TO RHYME!!!

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gyrfalcon
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gyrfalcon commented Comment · Sep 18, 2006

really, really fun. it's kinda nice to see you doing something less...er, morbid. not that I don't like your other stuf, but, hey, it's me!

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Snoink
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Snoink wrote a review Review · Sep 15, 2006

Hehehe... very Shel Silversteinish of you. ;)

This is my favorite poem of yours so far since, though the images it gives are very strange and unconventional, it still gives concrete images instead of abstract ideas.

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Wiggy
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Wiggy commented Comment · Sep 15, 2006

Weird, but I liked it! It was really cute! I am so going to have to try one of those poems! :D



If I'm going to burn, it might as well be bright.
— Frank Zhang