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I noticed in the beginning you never put periods after your abreviations. Whenever you say Mr. you have to use a period. Same with Mrs. ~Roya Actually, this is debatable. ...

What Claudette said, read LOTS of poetry. This just seemed kind of pointless, and way too violent. I mean, violence is okay when used in moderation and with a point. ...

Wow. Brain all twisted in strange knots. Good stuff, confusing, but good. hehe, I must admit, when I first read the title, I thought it was "nine lives of ALIEN ...

It's hard to find a really well done stream-of-conciousness piece these days, but this one really works. We follow the character's thoughts and emtotions seamlessly; there are no bumps or ...

I agree with Shafter about reading that book in long sittings--not really...healthy, but maybe that's just the way it is with Christians. Awesome book though! I got it on audio ...

This is fantastic, darling! I'm really enjoying it--even though I've only gotten through the first two chapters, I'll certainly read more later! Here's what I found in chapters one and ...

Aspen, that was wonderful! I know you must get this a lot--but are you really only nine? I think the poem might need a bit of trimming, there are a ...

I totally LOVE the Bartimaeus Trilogy!!! Deffinately on my top ten list. For anyone who cares, Bartimaeus himself provided a great deal of the inspiration for Tannar's charactor (Myth, go ...

What can I say; you know I'm a fan! I tend to agree with my esteemed colleages (^ them) on those three lines, and just one more small thing: I ...

After reading your short story I had to come and see what else you'd done. Again, lovely reading, darling, you have an old-world grace and style to your pieces that ...

Your story has a lovely simplicity about it, a simple charm that I didn't know still exsisted in writers today. This enchanted me, darling, it compleately drew me into your ...

Loved it darling! Sorry, I'm not much help at criting poems and I know you don't like it when I don't have anything constructive to say--but hey. I like it, ...

Beautiful story, darling! I started reading it because of the title--my real name's Amy. Very lovely, haunting, wonderful, I loved it! Just one little thing that popped out: During the ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: Oh....I love it. :-) can you tell! That's Incan perfectly--totally loved it.

w00tw00t!!!!!!! :D :D :D bird is happy, bird is very very happy!!! AT LAST! *sings* Caste is on YWS, Caste is on YWS!!! :-) Can you tell I'm happy? And ...