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The Great Hijacker pt. 1
prolouge, Okay, this was interesting. It wasn't very long, so I won't complain about that, I'll just point out what should be changed. First of all, I'll do your grammar/punctuation ...
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The Great Hijacker pt. 1
Chapter 1- " This man was reported missing three years ago." said agent Claw, "He must die... Do you understand Roy? I mean no traces at all...Dead!!!" Roy didn't care ...
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His father's Ring
"So, what is it?" asked Jacobe as he looked at the present his father had bestoed upon him."Anything you want it to be, just love yourself,and your famliy."Said his father ...
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Preps are bad for your sole?
Never mind its not here wasnt good anyway.
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Like a river pt 1
Hi after my last slip-up I guess this is the best I can do.... The day was young and so were we, Eating by the water. She loved me and ...