guineapiggirl

Helloooo! Here to revieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! Now then. This is a very interesting piece. It took me a second read to get it. I think I've got it. She's sort of running ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! "Slowly, so slowly she spun. Elegant as a flower yet quick as flame. Strong but soft, beautiful but deadly. Liquid from the heaven may shake or ...

Hiya. I'm Guineapiggirl and I'm going to do my best to review this! Before I start, welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it so far. Now for my review. ...

Hello imaginedragons! Welcome to YWS! Love your username, by the way! I also love your plot! This is a really interesting plot idea, of a princess trying to escape the ...

Aaaaaagh, this is really long! "No!" My mothers voice screeched as the knife held by the dark figure concealed by the shadows of our cabin, was driven into her chest. ...

Hiya! Guineapiggirl here to review your work. Firstly, I'd like to comment a little on the line lengths. How can you not see? How beautiful you are You mean so ...

HELLO! Guineapiggirl, here to review your story! Firstly, welcome to YWS, the most awesome place on the internet. I know you've been here for over a month but welcome anyway. ...

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Hello! Here to review! Although you have some lovely reviews already! Firstly, welcome to YWS! Because you're newish. Also, you haven't reviewed anything yet! You should do that. At least ...

Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! Welcome to YWS, tthe most awesome, amazing, fun place on the web with the BEST people! so, first, to the positives! I really like the ...

I've noticed that you've done lots of reviews yourself (well done!), so here I am to give you a little review :D Hey, you're newish. Welcome to YWS, the most ...

This is great! Beautiful! Beautiful! Really nice! Like Questio said, really different! My favourite verse is this: Perhaps it worries as it grows, it's watchful gaze that protects us, and ...

I think I reviewed you yesterday as well... A story? The Mirror? It was very good :D Anyway, here I am again! I'm going to do positives first, methinks :D ...

This is a pretty little piece. Good work! You've got some excellent description in there: "She can’t seem to rid herself of the image of your luscious, pink lips, and ...

ooooooh, disturbing. Hello there, and welcome to YWS! This is an interesting little piece. FIrstly, to the negatives, which I must say are few. You say that she quavered. Quavered ...