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Re: The Affair
Oooooh, this is really quite disturbing... I will never be able to think of drawing on paper in quite the same way again. So, Guineapiggirl here with a review. I ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Screaming
Hullooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Guineapiggirl here to review! This is an interesting piece. You've expressed very well the pain of the narrator. It is excellent. However, that is about it. That's all y
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Make It into Heaven
Ha ha, this is a pretty funny piece! You could call it blasphemous, I suppose, but it's pretty amusing nonetheless... Guineapiggirl here with a revieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! I like this. I think ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Bull Crap
Hi! Guineapiggirl here with your review! I actually thought this was a really good piece! I don't know anything about horoscopes so I don't know how accurate this is about ...
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: Hope Failed Her
Hulllooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! GUineapiggirl here to revieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! Oh, but first, welcome to YWS! Nice little poem here. I'm not quite sure wha
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: Disappointment
Oh that is so disappointing! Oh that makes me so sad! Oh her photographs! Sob sob. Poor her. Hello again! Yay! It is a Niteowl poem! Yay! I like Niteowl ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Unholy War
Hulloooo again! Guineapiggirl here with another review for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D So, if anything this is even more random. You have got Jesus doing some miracles and stuff, and you've
Feb 17, 2013 -
Re: Preacher's Wife
I LOVE THIS! IT'S REALLY GOOD! *GOES AND LIKES* You haven't got any reviews yet. Guineapiggirl is going to fix this. I think I've met you on here somewhere but ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: Kincade the Doctor?
Hey! This piece has been hanging around for ages with no review! I'm Guineapiggirl and I'm here to fix that :D This is a funny little piece! Very short, no ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: To Speak
Hellloooooooo! Guineapiggirl here to review!!!!!!!!!! Now, I've got to try and make a two hundred and fifty (you see what I did there? wrote it as two hundred and fifty ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: Less Than Nothing
Helloo! Guineapiggirl here to review you! So, I wouldn't listen to this song, myself. That said, if you attached a decent beat to it it would have better content than ...
Feb 14, 2013 -
Re: SIMON & FAITH - Chapter One
Hello AwesomeSauce! Here to review, as requested. right then... Firstly, to the issues with spelling and grammar and stuff. Not many major things: a birds nest That should be a ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Dreamwalker
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh this is very interesting! Oooh, I like this lots. This is nice story. "Seven children sat in a meadow. It wasn’t much, the meadow. It was grass and dirt ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Be my Valentine
Hellloooo, welcome to YWS! I think you've had problems with the line formatting like other people, yes? So I've done the correct formatting below to help you. Also, you've put ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary
Hi! Welcome to YWS! I don't quite get this story. I think the character of Jeff is quite interesting. I like all the little bits about the retail store and ...
Feb 13, 2013
