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Re: A Game of Catch
hEY! Guineapiggirl here to give you a review! So, I'm a leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettle bit confused. This reminds me of... well, to be perfectly honest, you know the fridge word magnets? You ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Locked in a Hall of Broken Mirrors
Ooooh, a Demoness poem! I've read one or two of your poems before and really enjoyed them! I have high expectations! Now I will read it. Aaaah, this is very ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The Fall
Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! This is a pretty decent poem. I have only one big problem with it and a few little nitpicky things. So, the big problem: Use ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're settling in nicely, and good work on doing some reviews already! I'm going to review your poem :D "The room chills and I ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Prepare to go Psychlo
HI! Firstly, so sorry for the ridiculous amount of time it's been since you requested a review! I had loads of homework, and then I was on holiday, and then ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: The Girl (edited)
Hey! I'm guineapiggirl and i'm going to give this piece a little review. Dogs is spot on with all the commas and full stops. Listen to him. You need to ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Love Poems
Hello! guineapiggirl here to review these little raps! Bit cheeky uploading three separate raps in one piece, but there we are. I sort of hate most rap. Apart from the ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: I Hate Funerals
Oooooh, this is weird! But quite cool.. guineapiggirl here to give you a little review. This piece was very interesting. I thought it was going to be all about why ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: That Boy
Hullooo! Guineapiggirl back to give you a review! I liked this piece. It was really interesting, hearing it from Madalynn's point of view. You did really well with making all ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: That Girl
Hello! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here. I'm guineapiggirl and I'm going to give you a little review of this piece here :D My initial impressions on ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: The One's Who Understand-Chapter Two
Hi. Guineapiggirl here to review! First though, welcome to YWS. I haven't read the first chapter of this but I gather the girl has a problem, he tried to help ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: Amens amantis
Hellooooo! Guineapiggirl here to review. But first, welcome to YWS! This is a very short poem so I will struggle to pull a 250 word review out of it, but ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Breathe
This is pretty. I'm not quite sure what it's about, but it's very pretty. Hullooo, guineapiggirl going to give you a revieeeeeeeeeew! I really like your opening and the way ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Jeff's Diary: Ode to Captain Butthurt
Hee hee, this section got a few chuckles out of me! Guineapiggirl here to review you again, although I imagine you're tired of me saying 'i don't get it, i ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Love Strikes
HEY! guineapiggirl here to review. Firstly though, welcome to YWS! I hope you're settling in happily. oh, and well done for doing loads of reviews already! To be perfectly honest, ...
Feb 27, 2013
