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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Game of Catch

    hEY! Guineapiggirl here to give you a review! So, I'm a leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettle bit confused. This reminds me of... well, to be perfectly honest, you know the fridge word magnets? You ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Locked in a Hall of Broken Mirrors

    Ooooh, a Demoness poem! I've read one or two of your poems before and really enjoyed them! I have high expectations! Now I will read it. Aaaah, this is very ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Fall

    Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! This is a pretty decent poem. I have only one big problem with it and a few little nitpicky things. So, the big problem: Use ...

    Mar 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're settling in nicely, and good work on doing some reviews already! I'm going to review your poem :D "The room chills and I ...

    Mar 18, 2013
  • Other » Humor, Narrative Re: Jeff's Diary: Prepare to go Psychlo

    HI! Firstly, so sorry for the ridiculous amount of time it's been since you requested a review! I had loads of homework, and then I was on holiday, and then ...

    Mar 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Girl (edited)

    Hey! I'm guineapiggirl and i'm going to give this piece a little review. Dogs is spot on with all the commas and full stops. Listen to him. You need to ...

    Mar 3, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Love Poems

    Hello! guineapiggirl here to review these little raps! Bit cheeky uploading three separate raps in one piece, but there we are. I sort of hate most rap. Apart from the ...

    Mar 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: I Hate Funerals

    Oooooh, this is weird! But quite cool.. guineapiggirl here to give you a little review. This piece was very interesting. I thought it was going to be all about why ...

    Mar 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: That Boy

    Hullooo! Guineapiggirl back to give you a review! I liked this piece. It was really interesting, hearing it from Madalynn's point of view. You did really well with making all ...

    Mar 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: That Girl

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here. I'm guineapiggirl and I'm going to give you a little review of this piece here :D My initial impressions on ...

    Mar 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: The One's Who Understand-Chapter Two

    Hi. Guineapiggirl here to review! First though, welcome to YWS. I haven't read the first chapter of this but I gather the girl has a problem, he tried to help ...

    Mar 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Amens amantis

    Hellooooo! Guineapiggirl here to review. But first, welcome to YWS! This is a very short poem so I will struggle to pull a 250 word review out of it, but ...

    Feb 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Breathe

    This is pretty. I'm not quite sure what it's about, but it's very pretty. Hullooo, guineapiggirl going to give you a revieeeeeeeeeew! I really like your opening and the way ...

    Feb 27, 2013
  • Other » Humor, Narrative Re: Jeff's Diary: Ode to Captain Butthurt

    Hee hee, this section got a few chuckles out of me! Guineapiggirl here to review you again, although I imagine you're tired of me saying 'i don't get it, i ...

    Feb 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love Strikes

    HEY! guineapiggirl here to review. Firstly though, welcome to YWS! I hope you're settling in happily. oh, and well done for doing loads of reviews already! To be perfectly honest, ...

    Feb 27, 2013


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