guineapiggirl

This is great! Well done! Good job! I like the way you started with a quote: as for “beautiful” - I think it’s overused, but I’d say the aesthetics of ...

this is an amazing poem! these are such nice things to say to someone. i think just having one person believe those things about you would make such a difference ...

Oooooooooooooooooh, a Haiku! You don't get many of them on YWS! I like the first line: "Out here in dark space" it introduces the subject matter like a haiku is ...

Hi. I just have a few little things to suggest to make your writing quality better. In a large part of the first paragraph: "A light shines suddenly in the ...

HI! I'm going to give this a little review! The other reviewer's already done about the story so I just have two little points about your general writing which could ...

This is a really nice little poem! Really good imagery and description. My favourite verse is: "Quite by accident I have found A boy who watches the gossamer web of ...

Really brilliant poem, and I couldn't agree with it more! It's so sad the way so many young girls don't want those things and just want to get married and ...

OOoooh, this is the edited version with less swearing? Crikey, what did the first version look like? I know you said your grammar's not great and it sounds like you're ...

HI! I like the subject of the poem and I think it's really cool that you've done such a long poem. I just have a few general things to suggest, ...

Hello! This is pretty good! You've got a nice writing style and for most of the piece your grammar and spelling were pretty good. Towards he end, however, it got ...

HI! i don't know the original of this song and I couldn't find it on Youtube so I'll just review this as lyrics unconnected to the- oh wait, i was ...

HI1 I'm going to review this. I really like the story. It's really good. I like the well of Somia (cool name) and I also really like the way you ...

I really like this GrapeNerd! We've already run into each other but I'll welcome you again anyway! There's a problem which is that you haven't done any line breaks and ...

Hey Niteowl! This has been hanging around way too long. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH, that video was disturbing! Like, seriously disturbing :O But these lyrics are GREAT! (chorus) Once I ate beef rare ...

HI! This is reallyfunny and good. I like it lots. a few lines that didn't quite work for me: "But my diet-it-ian says! Our touch stays far away. This love’s ...