greywords

I like this, I really do. I can tell that there is a lot of feeling behind this. I can understand where you are coming from to a certain extent, ...

Wow. This is really wonderful. I love the pictures you paint of the scenery that they pass by. You really express the emotions coming from seeing these locations quite well ...

This is a lovely piece. It does a good job of expressing how you feel. I do, however, have a few nit-picks for you. I am not sure if you ...

I love this; so much of it is startlingly accurate (maybe more so than I'd like to admit). Someone else already pointed out the nit-picky things that I noticed, so ...

This is quite an unusual piece, in a good way of course. Honestly, I am not quite sure what to think of it. In a way, it's haunting. I can ...

This is incredible. Truly. I can not begin to understand what went into the complete creation of this piece, as everyone's experiences are different. But, from my understanding, this description ...

The meaning to this is just.... Wow. When I was reading the first part, I was a little hesitant, and I didn't think I would really like it. But, I ...

First off, this is great. I love the image that comes to me when I read it. One thing that I would look at again is the first stanza. To ...

I just want to say wow. This was absolutely stunning. I don't really have any comments or suggestions, but I wanted to tell you how amazing this poem is. Really, ...

This is really quite wonderful. I don't really have any critiques at all. I think the contrasting portrayal of the Kind of Hearts is what captures the poem. He's a ...

This is beautiful all around. I like how you chose not to explain exactly what happened. To me, it speaks to the idea of not wanting to remember that memory. ...

Okay, wow. You had me going until the very end. I admit, I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did. Absolutely lovely. There was just one thing, one ...

I really like this. It connects personally for me, and work that does that is just amazing. I wouldn't say 'best friends forever' though. It doesn't seem to fit with ...

This is hauntingly beautiful, it really is. The only thing that I might suggest, and it would depend on where you wanted to put the emphasis, is splitting up the ...