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LOL! That was demented. The repetition made it all the more madning. Nice one

Don't know what to make of this one. I'm sensing mental anguish here. Like something feels wrong and you're not quite sure what it is. For the lack of information, ...

LOL! Cute. I hate peas myself. Taste just like death :)

LOL! Sounds a lot like what I just posted. I see what you mean about imagery. Makes it a lot more interesting. Good Job!

This seems like a poem about a love so strong that no tragedy can tare it apart. Sort of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet

This was creepy. I LOVE IT! Based on the narrative, I'm guessing it's suicide by Drain O'?

I'm actually thinking of changing the title. Yeah, you're right the title makes no sense for this poem. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Well, I was drunk when I wrote this, so that would explain alot. I was aiming for how sometimes happiness only comes in small doses. But, I can see how ...

Man, this was good. Way to show the emotional shame of defacing dignity for brief pleasure. I also like the way you showed it from both the woman and the ...

I've decided to keep Samantha out of the "spotlight" if you will, only because when I wrote this story is mainly about what I was feeling and thinking at the ...

Very simple to interpret. A little disturbing to read, but overall a very beautiful interpretation of self harm. I like how you did this in the third person, like sort ...

I really like the imagery in this one. You paint a very vivid picture here.

I thought this was pretty funny. It was short, straight to the point, but had a very good message. Nice job.

Yes, I know the paragraphs give it more of a story forum than a poem. I've never felt comfortable writing in stanzas. Maybe I should start making that a habit ...