graphiteshimmer

I'm about to post the second chapter. The main character didn't die, she went into a coma.

Aww, thanks. I would've used italics if I didn't also use them for her thoughts and another character that's being introduced in chapter 8. I still feel like it's good ...

Thank you so much! I'll get onto fixing those mistakes And, I had spent a while contemplating the "Our eyes were as big as our level of fear" line, because ...

Aww thank you :) Harambe was #97 I can live without bae Thanks for the review and stay bad XD

I really like this! It was really interesting, and a great poem about writing. It reminds me of Shel Silverstein in a way. Good luck writing!

Thank you!

Aww thanks! But I'm horrible at poetry XD

True, I should've added those... May be I'll make a second one :D and Harambe is life

Thank you for this review! And yes, I'm definitely looking forward to making more lists :)

Lol I agree all the way :) Thank you!

Thank you. Me and my friend Maddy wrote this list in seventh grade. We didn't make multiple drafts, so it is a little thrown together. But I plan on typing ...

This is like something I would see in a Shel Silverstein poem. Your poem really brought back my childhood.

Your poem was eye-opening. Good poems are hard to find (especially for a picky reader like me) but this one really hit me. I wish people could be as wise ...