100 We Say To Bae
1.)I love you.
2.)You are so adorable.
3.)We are goals.
4.)Let's take a selfie.
5.)It's our one week anniversary!
6.)What'd you get me for Valentine's Day?
7.)Hey, babe.
8.)Did I just see you looking at that other girl?
9.)What, is she better than me?
10.)Am I not good enough for you, is that what it is?
11.)Do you not care about me anymore?
12.)You don't love me anymore?
13.)Am I not pretty enough for you?
14.)Am I too fat?
15.)What should we name our kids?
16.)I'm thinking Shaniqua for a girl and Ladinavien for a boy.
17.)Can I wear your baseball jacket?
18.)Do I look good in this dress?
19.)Your parents scare me!
20.)Of course your opinion matters!
21.)SHUT UP!
22.)Let's walk down the hill together.
23.)We're lean and dab goals
24.)Your breath smells like Funyuns.
25.)It's not you, its me.
25.)Jk haha nope, it's definetely you.
26.)*calls* Text me. *hangs up*
27.)Be honest, do I look in the mirror too much?
28.)What do you mean, you have other plans?
29.)Your life doesn't revolve around me?
30.)Well that sucks.
31.)OMG, we've been together like, three whole days now!
32.)You haven't texted me back in like FIVE MINUTES.
33.)Are you cheating on me?
34.)Our song is on the radio!!!
35.)What do you mean you've never seen High School Musical?
36.)What about High School Musical 2 or 3?
37.)Teen Beach Movie? Seriously no?
38.)That couple is more goals than us.
39.)You need to step up your game.
40.)Don't get smart with me, mister.
41.)You hang out with your friends too much.
42.)They seem kinda shady.
43.)I don't want you to catch depression from them.
44.)Oh, you can't catch depression?
45.)You think i'm stupid or something? :(
46.)Why am I not in your bio yet?
47.)It's been like, a week and a half.
48.)It's not official unless i'm in your bio.
49.)Those are the rules, duh.
50.)Wanna go to Starbucks?
51.)*awkward face*
52.)Who's that girl you were talking to?
53.)Your mom?
54.) Oh, nevermind, sorry.
55.)Can I see your phone?
56.) I'm gonna have to delete all your female contacts.
57.)Am I too protective?
58.)We should see The Fault In Our Stars together.
59.)"...and then she died, passionately in his arms." Sorry, I was just planning our future.
60.)Do you think my sister's prettier than me?
61.)Why are you so quiet lately?
62.)Did you catch depression from your friends?
63.)l told you they were shady.
64.)Do boys have sleepovers?
65.)Taylor Swift is the only one that gets me.
66.)Oh, and you too!
67.)What's our ship name?
68.) You know what a ship name is. Like Jelena.
69.)He was so out of her league...TOTALLY not talking about Justin Bieber and Selena Gomez.
70.)I do not.
71.)Don't you think we're goals?
72.)You should cut your hair.
73.)You should grow out your hair.
74.)You should try a man bun.
75.)What about cornrows?
76.)Wait, no, no cornrows.
77.)You should just let me be your personal stylist.
78.)We're more goals than Romeo & Juliet.
79.)You're so lucky to have me.
80.)Shawn Mendez describes us so well.
81.)You sag too much.
82.)*longing stare*
83.)*sigh*
84.)*gasp*
85.)What can be our song?
86.)No, it can't be trap.
87.)It has to be romantic.
88.)You don't like Camp Rock?
89.)Why am I dating you?
90.)Oh yeah, cuz you're fab like me :)
91.)What's your street name?
92.)I mean address.
93.)I
94.)LOVE
95.)YOU
96.)CUZ
97.)WE
98.)ARE
99.)GOALS
100.)You're breaking up with me? Why? Am I not fab enough?
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Hello Remington38 nice to meet you
I was dying when I read this. It's so true and sooo funny. The dab and most rest of this is the reason I have no faith in our generation. I agree with some of the other reveiwers that putting it chronologically is a good idea. This was short and cute. A definite light read that I will be reading over again.
Lol I agree all the way
Thank you!
That's funny and true.
Warning to readers: do not read while drinking. I choked at the 'Shawn Mendes' one.
The middle school flashbacks came fast and hard, in all its former glory. Ah, to be young and fancy oneself in love!
The length is good; even the daunting number 100 is offset by the simplicity of the selections. Better yet, it even has a cute little ending!
I do agree with @alliyah in that this wouldn't be very hard to reorganize into more of a narrative. I believe that this list would be improved by doing this as the funniest moments are the ones that have previous build-up - catching depression, for one, and the chuckle at the end of the list.
The top of the list says '100 to say to bae'. I expect there's a missing word there? Shouldn't be hard to fix.
While I wouldn't call this a completely accurate depiction in fact, it feels correct, and as we writers know, that's often what matters more. In the end, this made me laugh in earnest, and I genuinely enjoyed it.
You mentioned you made more lists? I'm looking forward to reading them!
Thank you for this review! And yes, I'm definitely looking forward to making more lists
Haha, that gave me a good chuckle. Reminds me of the first pre-school "relationships", when you think you'll be together forever. Very accurate representation of that.
This is hilarious! I loved reading this and did so multiple times.
Good Luck and Keep Writing
Sláinte -Junel
Ha this made me laugh! I think this was a creative piece and wasn't quite what I expected it to be. My only suggestion would be, think about editing it to tell a more comprehensive story chronologically. You sort of tell a story of an immature modern relationship in the way the list goes already, but some of the sayings and numbers could be switched around.
Good work and always keep writing.
~alliyah
Thank you. Me and my friend Maddy wrote this list in seventh grade. We didn't make multiple drafts, so it is a little thrown together. But I plan on typing up more of the lists we wrote.