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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Ten Seconds

    I'm internally screaming right now. That was the honest-to-God best poem I've read in a loooong time. You did so good! I love how the character evolved throughout the story, ...

    Aug 30, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Argument Between Mother & Son

    Okay, first of all, coddle is my new favorite word. Thank you XD. So, I loved this short little narrative. It was great on it's own, but I'd love to ...

    Aug 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Culture Re: Colors of the World

    I loved this poem. I love how it emphasizes the most important commandments:love others and God, rather than the little ones in Leviticus and throughout that modern-day Christians like to ...

    Aug 29, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: James

    First of all, let me just say I am so sorry this happened to you. James is a total creep who should drop off the face of the earth after ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: The Painter

    This is so sweet. I love how inspiring this is. A girl who was born into this world blind, wanting to paint a picture, knowing she will never be able ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Author's Ballad

    OH. MY. GOSH. This was one of the greatest poems I have ever read. Well, I'd call it a free-verse poem. It's not really a story or an essay. But ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Script » Humor, Theatre Re: House Of Kehila (Episode 1)

    This story really drew me in from the first scene. It was really entertaining and funny. But I admit I got a little bored at scene 5, but it could ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Being white is right?

    If you have Netflix, i'd suggest watching "Dark Girls," a documentary about how women of other ethnicities often experience low self-esteem due to society's Barbie-doll beauty standards. It talks abou

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your Values

    *Googles definition of arbitrary* Okay, now i'm ready to review. This is my first review so please don't judge. Your poem was short but powerful. Google defines arbitrary as "based ...

    Jul 31, 2016


We're all stories in the end.
— 11th Doctor