gowtham1

Great poem.Great concept.I liked it.

Good concept.You have to change the starting of the lines into capital.

Good poem.The rhyming is somewhat awkward. And in the the 4th para 2nd line i think it should be "has" instead of "as".

Tere are no punctuations in your poem.But it was a scary one.

Why is this poem called okay.But the rhyming was good.well rename this poem and it was a good one.

Well it is a good poem.A poem about an expression or feeling which is different.Altogether a good one.

great poem. great rhyming.

it is not like a poem at all. it is like a is my opinion.sorry.

thanks u both for u r comments