goodolnoah

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I feel like this poem helps me learn a bit more about what was going on in the first chapter, lol. ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary Early afternoon light bleached golden walls further elongating tall shadows, as the busy work of daily ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I don’t usually write reviews for poems, so I hope this comes out alright! A nice simple tale about a brother ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I don’t usually write reviews for poems so I hope this comes out okay! I love how the spacing and word ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary He’d stood on that balcony until he nearly drove himself insane arguing with the voices in ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Gotta say, you really took your character descriptions to the next level here! The world is ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary He recognized that look in her eyes, "yes I wont over consume pastries, or flit too ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary My eyebrows scrunched up slightly as I remembered I had school. I sighed. I never fit ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary There is none of that to be found. The trees- tall, thin stakes impaling the ground- ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I wanted to preface here about why I have lots of recommendations for you. I understand you make your edits based ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This place and time was grey-coated in a layer of water, cloud cover indicating it had ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I have arrived to check out your awesome story! The name alone had me interested, and you always do great reviews ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “Now, your. Mission. Is to go through this time portal” The reveal that they have to ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Four, perfect, symmetrical, smooth white walls, and a similar white hard shiny floor and ceiling. And ...

Hello there! I have returned after my brief (long) departure from this series! I see that you’ve posted two new chapters which I have been yearning to get my hands ...