goodolnoah

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “But why?!” Alice asked, confusion swimming within her. Rebecca, Muerte, and even Sage, the space vampire

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Aren’t the space vampires in Earth? Isn’t Melissa alive? Wouldn’t she be more prone to dying? ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Wow, the confrontation with Antionette was an interesting one, and it seems like Alice is getting ...

Hello there! I see you are new to YWS. My name is goodolnoah and I’ll be doing a brief review of your story. I’ll let you know what I liked, ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “It’s not just you. This is planet Gelata. It’s devoid of life, but never runs short ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “There is a group of aliens called absorption vampires. They’re like your vampires, except they absorb ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I don’t usually review or comment on poems, so I will try my best here. I can see that this is ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary Greetings Vamp! (can I call you Vamp?) I’ve been wanting to check out one of your ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Lilian's strides had frozen, the autopilot seemed to ebb away, leaving her to grasp at thinning ...

Here with another review! Again, I LOVE YOUR ART! Is there a particular significance to the necklace that the character on this cover is holding? I see that the last ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “Let’s get this out of the way before you ask, no you're not adopted, and you ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! I was instantly drawn to your story upon seeing the glorious art that came along with it! The cover is truly ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Your descriptions are beautiful, truly electrifying! I feel like I have much to learn from your ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! This is an awesome little poem! It brought me on a story that tugged my heartstrings. I love the repeating of ...

Hello there, one of King Koopa’s loyal henchmen, here! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary This is quite the interesting prologue indeed! From the mysterious, seemingly fractured dark world to the ...