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where we christened each other anew nicknames that added to us gave us such dimension I really like this stanza! This made me really start to buy into the "people" ...

Hi Ley! Let’s get into this chapter. It seems like a big one! 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 The throne room of Olympus was as imposing as it was beautiful. The ...

Greetings, Ley! I know it’s been a long time coming and I have certainly stalled a bit LOL. I understand this story has come to an end and I feel ...

Hi Ellie! This poem caught my eye and I figured I would drop a quick review, Ellie! I’ve come to believe that happy people are a waste of time in ...

Hi Khushi! I remember reading your mage series and now I see you have a newer, lighter-toned work. I don’t usually review comedy works, but let’s see what we’ve got ...

Hello! I’m here to review this terrific poem! Grind me up to mar my face This first line here is very striking, and the lyrical tone that the rest of ...

Hi! I see you are new here at YWS and you’ve posted a new work! Hello and welcome, I hope you are doing well! 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 It was ...

Hey Raven! I saw this and I don’t tend to read fanfiction, but I know almost NOTHING of Elden Ring lore (Radagon, Golden Order, Ash, Erdtree, it all rings a ...

this is such a nice poem about writing! It is a CRIME that this has been hanging in the green room for so long, so I'll give you my thoughts! ...

Ah...Bougainvillea. It's a common type of flowery, thorny vine. I like how you rope the idea of the flower into the story without outright saying it's meaning. What I got ...

Hello Raven! Quite the tense chapter we have here… 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 The topic of Thorneheart Manor and Hinata already put her on edge, but being alone with her ...

A new glorious season is upon us! Finals have subsided and I’m happy to be back for Delirium! 𔓘 Writing Commentary 𔓘 As Nelle started fixing the bed sheets, Lydia ...

Ouuu this is really cool! It feels like a passage that one might find in a video game (another zombie-like game like Last of Us, Resident Evil, etc…) I like ...

I am floored. This short story covers so many important topics in such a short amount of time. I feel it's not much of a stretch to say that this ...

Hello there! I have returned to continue this glorious story. Let’s see where chapter 3 takes us, hm? Writing Commentary Lydia glanced out the long row of windows to her ...