goddessathena

Thank you, your review was wonderful to receive. I totally get the clandestine bit, I just couldn't think of anything else because I really wanted it to end with Valentine. ...

Thank you so much. Your review is fantastic and thanks for the feedback. About the punctuation you are totally correct. I always use appropriate punctuation, it just flew my mind ...

Thank you so much for this review. All of your points are good and well-reasoned without being overly critical. Her are a few explanations for a few things you pointed ...

Thanks for writing this review, I just need to ask: was that a polite way of telling me this is absolute trash? If so, say so. It's not supposed to ...

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Wow, this is wonderful. The emotive and descriptive language is so beautifully strong its a work of art. The repetition of 'burnable' and 'bloodthirsty' well portrays the tone of the ...

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Wow, this is wonderful. It is short and too the point, but still manages to convey a powerful message. I like the irregularity of the structure and the way in ...

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I really enjoyed this. You are definitely a skilled writer. This is relatable for most people (including me), especially the way in which you described it as your first friend. ...

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This is simply wonderful. It's brief and to the point. I really like the way in which you take an overused phrase and warp it into something funny. Unsurprisingly, I ...

This is simply wonderful. It's brief and to the point. I really like the way in which you take an overused phrase and warp it into something funny. Also, it ...

Thank you, that's a great point. I understand how that might be good for a lot of poems, but I wanted mine to be more open ended. In this way, ...

Thank you for your review, but I would just like to point out that there is no reason for an apostrophe on the thirteenth line. With 'it' an apostrophe is ...

Love it! You are an amazing writer and I loved the plot of the poem. I enjoyed the twist and pace of the poem, as well. The way in which ...