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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Random Choice of Poems

    Hey there! I really liked all your poems! They were funny, and interesting. :) Here are my seperate thoughts: First Poem: I love reading anything about the Holocaust, because it ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Who Will Cry

    Hi there! I really liked this poem. It fits "Dramatic Poetry" very well. :) You're stanzas are in great shape, the poem flows very well if you recite it, and ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Despite My Broken Heart

    Hi there! Wow, poor Jade! She confessed to her friend about her sexuality, and lost everything! This is really sad, but I like it! I'm sure some people could relate ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Too late

    Hi there! I really liked your poem! It had a lot of emotion and detail, which is good, but are you talking in his or her's point of view? I'll ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Guardian Angel

    Hi there! You made me cry! I am a huge sucker for romance and sad endings, and this one totally made me cry! I loved the plot, how the guy ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: What have you done?

    This is the second Hermione/Draco fanfic that I've read from you, and you never disappoint! :D I love the plot this time! Draco killed Harry, now Hermione kills Draco, with ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Hesitation

    Hi there! ... This is amazing! I love this! I love Draco's debate on whether or not to kill Hermione, and Hermione confessing to him. It just made him stress ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Garden Of Words

    Hi there! I am at loss for words. This poem is one of my favorites now! Okay, this poem is very long, and I debated whether or not to read ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled Optimist Poem

    Hey there! I read your poem and saw a few nit-picks I'd like to get out of the way before actually talking about your poem. Here it is: Red- Spelling ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Soft Forge

    Hi there! I really like this poem! It makes me imagine about a lot of things, and the words help me imagine it vividly. It's short, but it contains so ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How Come?

    Hi there! I think this poem has a lot of questions that everyone might be thinking about for racism. I too wonder why people treat eachother differently because they don't ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Worldly Desires

    Hi there! Okay, I seriously disagree with this being "terrible"! This is really good! The poem flows great, the stanzas are in awesome shape, the poem itself is awesome! I ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tristesse

    Hi there! I love this poem! This is also one of my favourites now. :) I love that piece! The sound is so... sad, delicate, and beautiful! I listened to ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: London Riots

    Hi there! I think this is really good! I think this gave the picture of a very... brutal riot. I loved this stanza: Tempers flarings, Citizens take to the streets, ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Changes

    Hey there! I love this poem! It's so pretty and the poem flows so well! The rhyming is awesome and you used pretty good intermidate words! Although, I don't know ...

    Aug 19, 2011


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