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Re: A Random Choice of Poems
Hey there! I really liked all your poems! They were funny, and interesting. :) Here are my seperate thoughts: First Poem: I love reading anything about the Holocaust, because it ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Who Will Cry
Hi there! I really liked this poem. It fits "Dramatic Poetry" very well. :) You're stanzas are in great shape, the poem flows very well if you recite it, and ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Despite My Broken Heart
Hi there! Wow, poor Jade! She confessed to her friend about her sexuality, and lost everything! This is really sad, but I like it! I'm sure some people could relate ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Too late
Hi there! I really liked your poem! It had a lot of emotion and detail, which is good, but are you talking in his or her's point of view? I'll ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Guardian Angel
Hi there! You made me cry! I am a huge sucker for romance and sad endings, and this one totally made me cry! I loved the plot, how the guy ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: What have you done?
This is the second Hermione/Draco fanfic that I've read from you, and you never disappoint! :D I love the plot this time! Draco killed Harry, now Hermione kills Draco, with ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hesitation
Hi there! ... This is amazing! I love this! I love Draco's debate on whether or not to kill Hermione, and Hermione confessing to him. It just made him stress ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Garden Of Words
Hi there! I am at loss for words. This poem is one of my favorites now! Okay, this poem is very long, and I debated whether or not to read ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Untitled Optimist Poem
Hey there! I read your poem and saw a few nit-picks I'd like to get out of the way before actually talking about your poem. Here it is: Red- Spelling ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Soft Forge
Hi there! I really like this poem! It makes me imagine about a lot of things, and the words help me imagine it vividly. It's short, but it contains so ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: How Come?
Hi there! I think this poem has a lot of questions that everyone might be thinking about for racism. I too wonder why people treat eachother differently because they don't ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Worldly Desires
Hi there! Okay, I seriously disagree with this being "terrible"! This is really good! The poem flows great, the stanzas are in awesome shape, the poem itself is awesome! I ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Tristesse
Hi there! I love this poem! This is also one of my favourites now. :) I love that piece! The sound is so... sad, delicate, and beautiful! I listened to ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: London Riots
Hi there! I think this is really good! I think this gave the picture of a very... brutal riot. I loved this stanza: Tempers flarings, Citizens take to the streets, ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Changes
Hey there! I love this poem! It's so pretty and the poem flows so well! The rhyming is awesome and you used pretty good intermidate words! Although, I don't know ...
Aug 19, 2011
