germsieGal

Omg, so sweet :D I couldn't stop reading. You have to write another chapter soon! There is a couple of errors, they will be in red. When she pulled away ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! If you want some more reviews you're going to have to review other peoples work. Our kitchen had more dust than food. I love that ...

Awesome! I like it so far and will keep reading. :D But everytime a new person talks it's sopossed to be a new paragrph, and the words in red are ...

Very interesting making the animals the charcters :D very good! Here are the errors I found. (errors are in red.) “ No matter what the police report says, it was ...

Aweeh. It was so sweet and true. Im sure girls and guys would love to say this to someone. I know I would. Please keep writing, you're really good :D ...

Aweeeh, very sweet :) it flows nicely, a few spots it kind of didn't, but thats alright. Every second we're together my senses become alive I love that line. It ...

Wow. Very good, couple tiny error's. Why can't i make this better? Just change it to a capitol. Does this matters ? I don't think that should be matters, it ...

I liked :) Keep writting it! I'm going into highschool in a year so im kind of scared about it, becuase I know some of my friends will get into ...

Omg it's off of spongebob :D Love this remake of it though! So awesome! :D

I liked this :) Very good written, i loved when you said: his voice sounded like ice hitting stained windows . I do have a few errors I will point ...

OMG. I loved this! It was so interesting, I couldn't stop reading it! I love how you made me feel and see what she/he was feeling and seeing, I felt ...