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Re: The Hunter: Prologue
Hi. Just another reporter on your fantastic story. I have to say that I greatly enjoyed it and I would love if you could PM when you have more finished. ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: In Such a Night
Firstly, WOW. I reeeaaalllyyy liked this. It told the story, had an awsome plot and was well described, all round it was very good. Just a few things i picked ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: DELETED
I really enjoyed this. I thought i was very well done and it made me interested to hear more. Im REALLY ( I use caps coz im excited XD) interested ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Writing: My Release.
Wow. This is really good. Now, i dont write poetry so i can't really offer any advice or anything but i wll give a personal opinion. I really enjoyed it ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
Hey. Well. this was great. I have never reveiwed something from one of the "Romantic Fiction" pages but i will definatly be back for more of this. I LOVED it. ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Beast: Prologue
Ok. Overall. It was good. One thing that did annoy me though was the fact you kept repeating "unnatural yellow eyes" It really got onmy nerves. Other parts were a ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
OMEE!!!! *fan girl squeal!* This was great. A couple of things though. 1. Edward never calls her "Bells" 2. Edward seemed a bit superficial. (i know, he is usually) But ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Train Wreck (ch 1) Rewrite
This is really good. I quite enjoyed it and i think once i read the others i will have a better idea fo whats going on. There were some un-necsessary ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Carter's Secret
THIS IS PURE AWSOME. Okay. It was a tad predictable and i did kinda guess that her brother was gay but it was really good. Some things to work on ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Logan, Necromancer Prologue (Revised)
This was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. There are a few spelling errors here and there but other then that it was really good. It drew me in ...
Jan 26, 2009
