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Hey there! I really like this! I can kinda imagine mellow piano for the first verse, drums for the chorus and then like piano, drums and guitar for the rest ...

Hey there! First off I must say that this was a brilliant piece. There was raw emotion in it, the rhyming was beautiful and didn't sound forced. Plus the message ...

Wow I have never seen nor wrote anything like this in my whole life! In fact I never saw this in class or anything like that! ;) Haha. Well anyway, ...

Hey there! I really like this. The whole time I was reading this I was humming the songs (which were excellently picked by the way). And grammar wise I didn't ...

Hi there! First off, I have to tell you that since my name is Hope I felt the strong urge to review this. I really liked the message of this ...

Hey there! First off I really like this! NCIS is a great show and I'm glad there's some fanfiction about it on here. The only thing I can point out ...

Hey there! My name is Hope and I'll be giving you a review today. First off, I love the theme and the message of this. Being a avid coffee drinker, ...

Oh goody glee fanfiction! I like this is it supposed to be before the show starts because you're introducing everyone (I'm guessing Rachael's POV.) I like this a lot keep ...

Hello there! Let me start out by saying how much I love this! You have made the character of death, who is normally portrayed as a grumpy... well I'm not ...

]Hey there! I see you have done some editing- nicely done. It's a huge improvement. :) However, I did see a few tiny things that I questioned as I was ...

Why hello there! I'm geekchic but you can call me Hope. :) As for your poem, I really liked it. It beings up a lot of important issues that aren't ...

Hey there! I really like this poem. The emotion you put in it was raw and I felt it. I only saw a couple of things I thought I could ...

First off, let me say how amazing this is. It's full of raw emotion and it is just indescribably good. The two minor things I can point out are capitalizing ...

Pretty much everyone else already posted the things I saw. The only other thing I can think of is that I thought the word "eyes" was a little repeatitive. Maybe ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I love how you repeated the last line in each stanza (blank eyes, blank page). I loved how you described the sister's eyes and what ...