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Re: Feelings
yes i have felt this pain and i love how u have shown us what u felt and how u explain it to the reader with the interest of finding ...
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Re: The Words in My Mind
ok i really love your writing style and how your talk to us and just making your thoughts live with the screen.everything about your poems are good for me and ...
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Re: Midnight Longing
i get an image of a girl dancing around her room looking in a mirror when i read this is short and sweet but still good and better then what ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Open Season
this is mind blowing and to be honest this is the first time i seen a writing style like this in a poem.i seen others where your like talking to ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Sorry, The Light Has Been Extinguished
i love it .i love everysingle word it is amazing poem.how it talks about the worst in front.how you put in the electrician in the poem making it more real.the ...
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Re: Broken Home
i love this poem you really put your mind to it and i am fairly new to this site also trying to work on my poetry aswell for im not ...
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Re: Maybe
i like the a and b setting u have here but it a little plain.there is a good idea to this but when u sorta just use it more like ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: No fate, only chance
hey i may be new to this site but i like your work.this has a lot of potential u put in it and i can see u tried from the ...
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Re: Sadistically Sweet
ok sorry for posting more then once this is the first time i used this sight and did not know that u needed a certian amount of words to count ...
May 3, 2016
