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Thank you for your review!!

I will surely keep that in mind, thanks!

Thank you for your review! I keep your points in mind for my next poem :) The reason the rules are a bit antique is because I was going for ...

thank you for your review!

Thank you so much for your ideas. To be honest I wasn't really sure if it had the potential to become anything more but now that you have told me ...

Thank you so much for your comments! I wasn't really sure if it would constitute as a poem or just free verse :)

Thank you for your comments :)

Thanks a ton for your review! I was referring to David Bowie in this verse actually, and I will take your points into account for next time! The second quote ...

First off, I absolutely love this piece. It is very romantic in nature, almost reminiscent of the likings of Kerouac and Ginsberg (Beat writers). No qualms really about this but ...

thanks so much for the review! Yeah it did have a message behind it but i wanted that message to mean something different to each person :)

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Hi there, just here to leave a little review! First off I absolutely love the darkness surrounding this poem...very fitting for Halloween! The last line "reminding her why she was ...

Thank you so much and yeah it was intentional and I was really hoping someone would pick up on it so kudos to you for that :) I love the ...

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Hi there, just leaving a short review... This piece has so many emotions playing amongst the stanzas, I absolutely love it! I love the ending especially the almost missed ''tick'' ...

Thank you so much for your review! I was going to put it as poetry but I wasn't sure if it qualified so I just left it as Other :)

Thanks for such a detailed review! I appreciate the time put into it! Your advice is going to be taken into consideration, no worries about that!. I'm glad that you ...