fun4eva

Thank you everyone! Sure, I'll work on everything that you've said and I appreciate it...thanks again...I'll edit it soon! :)

yup! I do...lol... Thsnks shine! It meant lot to me that you red it!

thanks mars!! And since this is the first chapter,I tried not to rush things.... In the second chapter, a bit of hint is given as to what the plot might ...

Thanks Sudz!!! I took up your idea of getting selena to spoil the dance. I mentioned her at the end! And yeah, I hadn't named the m.c yet! lol! But ...

Oh my gosh! This was great... It had such a nice meaning. At first, I was a bit confused, but then I got it.. A very good read, I must ...

Thanks Chirantha!!! Thanks SUdzz!!! I have made the changes and I will keep in mind wat Sudz told me!Q!! Thanks a lot once again!

Thanks a lot Chirantha!! I made the changes you told me too....

thank you tennis princess, dark star and Matt!! Thanks a lot all of you...

Thanks Sapphire! I am tired I will make the changes tomorrow... And I'll keep in mind what you said!

hii!!! ok, that was awesome.... the emotion was so easily felt.. The words were simple but it meant so much... I don't think there's any otheer way to describe this ...

Wow! Just wow! I can completely relate to this. The words are so simple yet meaningful. No review from me. I didn't find anything wrong in it. Anyways, keep writing!

thank you for the help guys, I am currently working on re writing it...After I have please come back and leave your comments. Loads of luv, Fun4eva.

OK, so I have edited the first and last stanza like you'll said.. I replaced the "pouch" part with "slouch". What I actually meant by pouch was my compass where ...

hey guys please suggest some nice titles for this one...please please do....I thought of some like "the big question" or "tired of life". Along withyour critiques/comments I would appreciate title ...

hmm...nice one!